What do u think of these poems?

I told myself that God had forgotten me...

After a lifetime of pain and nights filled with loneliness

He had no one for me to love

Just move on, it will be ok.

And then I met you.

I knew it was all wrong,

But I looked into your beautiful eyes... and I let you in...

Into my heart, into my family, into my home.

You gave me hope when I had none.

You took my hand and let me think about

A life with a man who will always love me....



I hid my love when young till I

Couldn't bear the buzzing of a fly;

I hid my love to my despite

Till I could not bear to look at light:

I dare not gaze upon her face

But left her memory in each place;

Where eer I saw a wild flower lie

I kissed and bade my love good bye.

What do u think of these poems?
if u have written them they are great keep working at it am sure ur best still to come. of they are someone elses they are great and their best is still to come.
Reply:most excellent



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Reply:beautiful. i think u should find a tune (tone) for this poem. it'll make a wonderful song.
Reply:beautiful
Reply:part of the top poem felt like me (for when you lose someone you love God may seem none existent) but it was a beautiful poem.
Reply:Somebody will probably report you for being in the wrong category
Reply:really good
Reply:wonderful
Reply:9/10.......good one
Reply:sad and depressing for me
Reply:I think I just saw inside your soul

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