AS the tall majestic palms sway in the warm summer breeze, I look out to the wide open sea, so deep and blue ,like the me I never knew, the sweet whisper of the wind flooded the air, like the ocean without a care, A glance at the past is like watching sand slip through an hour glass,ohh how I miss the green green grass, the sweet smelling flowers, and the peaceful songs of the wild birds, as I stared at the gentle water that flowed under the bridge, I realized something I never knew I missed the most, the soft kiss of the sun on your dark brown hair, or the way you smiled when I made you laugh, , the sun is setting now and the sun changes into moon as the sky darkens ,I glare at the moon and hope you are too, things don’t seem right when you're not by my side, Now I must say goodbye before the thoughts of you make me cry.
By: Trista Mcc
What do you think of this poem i wrote?
please don't wrote any more
or try harder.......
Reply:Nice,but why did you withdraw "Sadie"?
Reply:pass
Reply:BOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reply:Fab! well done you!!!
Reply:great !!!!!! your friend would love it !!!!!!!
Reply:i really like it i think you should get it published i also write poems if u wanna share more with me let me know my email address is melody5513@yahoo.com and please send me an email with your poem again. I really liked it. TAKE CARE
Reply:it is very good.
Reply:It's good okay but when I said it like a song to my mum and dad, they started crying and said " that was a great song"
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