FRIENDLESS
I am a lonely, the friendless as can be
People do not have pity on me
I cannot have fun as others can
Everybody says me BE OUT MAN
I am an outsider, without eyes, a blind child
I can’t pluck flowers that are wild
I can’t pull teasing dog’s tail
Nor allowed to read fairytales
These sad thoughts make me go mad
And I want you to call me A FRIEND MY LAD
Do u like this?
this is very sad, but very good, it will help people take notice, keep up the good work.
Reply:surely it is a good piece of poem.
job well done .Keep it up Adaysha
yes u can be a good poet.yes u are.
-Ishu Report It
Reply:a bit to depressing for me
Reply:A FRIEND MY LAD........ Yes.
Reply:Is it true?
Reply:oh well go buy some happy pills off the doctor
Reply:it is good lad
Reply:oh bly me!
darling i think u need to see a phsychiatrist.
dont worry. u will be able to pull a dog's tail one day.
Reply:It's really touching.
Reply:THE POEM IS -
LET ME TELL YOU SOME THINGS ABOUT YOU
EITHER THE POEM IS ON YOU
OR ELSE
YOU HAVE A MULTIDIMENTIONAL PERSONALITY THAT MEANS YOU THINK A LOT AND ACCUMULATE DIFFERENT THOUGHTS AND VIBRATIONS INSIDE YOUR MIND.
THAT MAKES YOU THINK ABOUT WHAT OTHERS THINK
U CAN SERVE WELL AS A LAWYER OR JUDGE OR SIMILAR PROFESSIONS
AND ALSO U CAN BE A GOOD FRIEND TO OTHERS
LIKE ME
SO IF U WANT TO KNOW WHETHER I LIKED THE POEM GUESS IT URSELF THE ANSWER IS G__D
SO BYE
Reply:dont be sad baby. u will get best in life
and frnds?
if u like old age friend say 50 y u can mail me
Reply:OK i will call U A FRIEND MY LAD, fine now dont go in more emotion's.
Reply:sure girl..u've got feelings ..keep it up....@
Reply:I think it is worded well but a bit too depressing for me.
Reply:I dont belive this
Reply:I am your friend and if u allow I shall be your eyes, I shall teach u to see more than what people see with their eyes, U are no outsider, because u exist within me, and your thought is uppermost in my mind. With a friend like me, u can have endless fun, so what, if u cannot pull tease a dog's tail, u can pull my hair or my ears, I am your friend the moment u decide to make me your friend.
Reply:Depressing...
Reply:Too much misery for me.
Reply:ratikanta.hali is the 1st
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Saturday, February 11, 2012
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