Lonely in paradise?

fragrant wild flower scent

mingles with the breeze

the joyful song of singing birds

rings out among the trees



Sunlight's dancing on the water

sprinking it with gleam

adding to the beauty

of the softy foaming stream



I gaze upon the heavens

watch two clouds as they ride by

they look like giant horses

white stallions in the sky



I'm standing in the chruch yard

where as a child I was blessed

I've come to see my mother

for it's where she's laid to rest



I'm writing this for you my love

my darling wife and friend

I know now if your reading this

my days are at an end



I wish that i could break my vowel

till death do us two part

it pains me dear to think of you

alone with broken heart



It's only thoughts of you my love

that make me sad that I have died

for I am here in paradise

with mother by my side.

Lonely in paradise?
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Reply:Wow, it is good.

I like it. didn't you mean vow, not vowel?

Very nice work:)

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