Hey? what do u think?...of this poem?

when i was a baby, way younger then you, i saw the green grass i saw the sky blue. i fell to ur feet just trying to walk, i knew i loved u before i could talk. ur love made me spin around, as i tripped and fell to the ground. love is great and can be shared, u could see my face from anywhere. i would stare at ur face for nearly two hours, u smelled so sweet like wild flowers. the purfume u wore just blew me away, i still think of u to this very day. u r my mother my great deal of life, ur the best mom and to dad the best wife..





we love u mom.





so, this is a poem to my mother, whom i just met, what do u think? please tell me. and if u like it i will make some more for u, and ask 4 ur name and dedicate it out 4 u if u want.. do u like this poem or not?

Hey? what do u think?...of this poem?
I love the poem.. made me kinda teary-eyed.

Then when I read that you had not met the woman that you wrote it about till recently.. it made me sadder yet.



She will be sad reading it, knowing she just met you.



Maybe she will be happy knowing you love her enough now to write it.

Well written poem... very kid of you to write it for your mom.



I am wondering if you remember staring at her... if you just met her.



Nice poem though.
Reply:For begginer poet and coming from an established author and poet, I would say your off to a good start.