Do you like it? (It's not a poem...i dunno how to call it...a prose perhaps?) How does it make you feel?

"worldling about...staying somewhere...all alone..in a place and time i can call heaven..

away from everyone else. Where all my cares don't have to matter again.

When all i sense are...dew drops glistening on grass and petals of colorful wild flowers...an endless expanse of sun kissed misty green meadows...a symphony of sweet melodic chirping birds..

gentle rustling of tree branches and leaves...cool breeze...sparkling water rippling freely...bright blue skies...and silver linings...slowly turning to a picturesque painted hues of pinks,oranges and purples....slowly .. peacefully transforming into dancing silhouettes and shadows cast against grey...a cold rush of wind touching my face from time to time...as i stare in awe...unflinched..mesmerized by the beauty stretched boundless before my dreamy eyes ...of star clad black skies...millions and millions of shimmering lights...twinkling little bright light bulbs...sparse translucent cloud hovers over a fantastic moon...the biggest one I have ever seen...illuminating glorious light for the darkest of night...i reach out and i can almost touch it....i smile to myself contently...my eyes are getting heavier...i hear...

softly chirping crickets...lulling my weary soul to a peaceful sleep.."

Do you like it? (It's not a poem...i dunno how to call it...a prose perhaps?) How does it make you feel?
It's a word painting. If you were an artist, you could show it on canvas. What a relief to read something poetic and positive that you've written. I'm still waiting for a humourous poem.
Reply:Dude, you just riped off my *crickets chirping*... ehhh... it's ok, I've read better from you.
Reply:WoW what a power' and lovely poem.I loved everything you described 'and 1i think that;s what heaven consists of beautiful things what you wrote and and more.,
Reply:Try Free-Verse.
Reply:so at peace..
Reply:It's a prose poem. A poem written in prose rather than verse.



It's good. Reminiscent of Whitman...
Reply:nice
Reply:its called a prose poem. i write poetry myself and i got to say that was a beautiful poem. did you write it yourself.
Reply:wow. its really good! did you write that?
Reply:it does sound more like a prose, its peaceful and also

inviting. almost like heaven.
Reply:peaceful but at the same time powerful
Reply:I really don't know that much poetry but that's really peaceful and moving.Thank you for sharing that.If you've written that -I hope you become famous for it one day!Keep on writing:)