Will you please "Consider The Lilies"?

CONSIDER THE LILIES





Consider the lilies

In your journey through life



They no of no mysteries

Of hard labor and strife



They just are

Growing wild



In the fields by the hundreds

Unconcerned for mankind



Are we learning a lesson

From their flowering light?



To accept our condition?

Just to be?



To turn our heads to the sun

And fold gently at night?

Will you please "Consider The Lilies"?
that's great Jesus would love this poem
Reply:You may be treading on a copy right violation in your title. I thought I recognized the title as a poem written by Ian Smith. I did a web search on the title and came up with at least a half dozen items using this title including a famous painting.



You have issues with your offering: spelling, grammar, timing, meter last but not least punctuation.



This is not to say your effort is not worthy of notice. You must learn from your mistakes and keep on keeping on.



Good luck.

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